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Complicated... LOL still I like.
**This took me HOURS to get all the notes down. BUT i finally did it lol.**
Does this mean you have put this in a grid completely... that IS a hellofa job!!!
Author's Response:
If I could take a guess it was about 3000 notes I had to put down. So yea. Thats why it took me so long.
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just because this is one of the most copied track ever...
Author's Response:
Doesn't mean it's bad.Most of anything in the Video Game genre could get 0's from you if you base your entire review off of originality.
Obviously if you can't enjoy all of the covers of this song,you must not have a taste in Super Mario music.
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intresting demo, it sounds like you know what you are doing. The only point of complaining (keeping in mind that its a demo version0 is that the lead line is quiet boring after one anda half minute, a bit of variation (even with a flanger or something allong those lines) would give it a way more intrested vibe.
Love the building up in the filter at the start of the song.
Keep up the good work, we need more girls who know how to handle software ;0.
Author's Response:
He he,
these reviews are great,
Plenty of constructive criticism here, and I agree =D
I'll see how the leadup goes to this chorus, and hopefully, I'll be able to think of some variation.
Anyways, thankyou for the review =)
Brittany
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It seems that you are really proud of your own work so i will keep my review clean.
Basicly the overall track is quiet alive already, lots of things are happening, but the issue is that its only within one line, the higher sounds.
There is no variation in bass, kicks, highheads. Maybe a vocal would add already a lot to give this idea a bit more vibe.
overall its not bad, I assume that you are playing around with music programs for not that long now, but I see potention.
Learn how to bring variatie in a track and digg deeper, you wont regret it ;).
Author's Response:
Yep :P
Ty! And ye.. I'm a Noob ^^
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Do you remember the game *forsaken* (ps1 N64 and pc) believe me, it would have been a great song for that game.
Good atmosphere, ambient is not an easy genre.
Keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Can't say that I do, but thanks for the compliment. I really appreciate the feedback.
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Maybe its not romantic but at least you show off your creativeness AND love for her by making something special for her ;) did the same with my own track called Twitch, and its everyhting but romantic, but believe me, she was really happy with it ;) keep up the good work, I like the story behind the song.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I listened to your some of your tracks, and I am impressed. You have been busy for some time I see, and it shows in your works. Im glad to see that you have an ambition of creativity too. We need more people like that in this world.
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Then I wonder how the final versio is going to be ;) keep up the good work, it soudns intresting
Author's Response:
Like most of the songs i have it's definately a work in progress. thank you for the kind review! I'm planning on replacing the synth guitar with a real guitar recording. keep in touch, definately more to come
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a song with a deeper tought, like that fact!
The track itself sounds finished. Sure it will do a good job on the floor ;).
Its devided altrough the leadline is coming back maybe a bit to often. Still high points for the intension of bringing real facts up front by making music, I like that!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I spent alot of time EQ'ing the track so it it didn't sound distorted, I'm bored of this song myself probably because I heard it over and over whilst making it... It does start to annoy you when repeating over and over and over and............
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I am so sorry for saying this, cause the song itself is just proper, but its just way to.... been here done that....
still, keep up the good work, cause how you have arragned the track its just properly. but nothing special to me...
Author's Response:
I understand where you are coming from. This sub-genre of trance is around everywhere. Probably enough to annoy anyone who listens to trance. Though, I would've really liked some creative critisism.
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Its nothing really special but what I can appriciate is that its comletely worked out and masterd, its a typical song that you could hear on a fairground while riding one of the rides. the vocals are done very proffesional. You maybe not a proffie yet but you have proved that you can handle the software ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the rev, yeah I can definitly handle the software :P
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