intresting
Dont know the former mixes but I just judge this one for what it is for now. At least... somebody NOT showing of with *CHECK HOW QUICK I CAN MAKE MUSIC* cause 99 out of 100 times I just rather dont listen to those tracks...
The overall theme of your track is more then good, its stable, the only thing that I would like to see in a different way is the approach of the lead line. Its like a quick one that HAS to get the train on time so we just do it like a short version, do you catch that drift? If you make your intro a bit longer and more intresting and then let the lead come up, it already gives it way more space to express the story.
Hope to hear a full version when finished :). Keep it up, you know what you are doing.