Carf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[SkyFly!]

happy vibes!

It seems that you are really proud of your own work so i will keep my review clean.
Basicly the overall track is quiet alive already, lots of things are happening, but the issue is that its only within one line, the higher sounds.
There is no variation in bass, kicks, highheads. Maybe a vocal would add already a lot to give this idea a bit more vibe.
overall its not bad, I assume that you are playing around with music programs for not that long now, but I see potention.
Learn how to bring variatie in a track and digg deeper, you wont regret it ;).

eXite responds:

Yep :P

Ty! And ye.. I'm a Noob ^^

[Project Bluebook]

Gamestylish!

Do you remember the game *forsaken* (ps1 N64 and pc) believe me, it would have been a great song for that game.
Good atmosphere, ambient is not an easy genre.
Keep up the good work

Akaliko responds:

Can't say that I do, but thanks for the compliment. I really appreciate the feedback.

[- Feelings -]

good atmosphere

got a really catchy vibe. wonder how it would sound with lyrics on it ;)
Keep up the good work.

I hope that *that someone special* like it aswell ;)

[Mercury Snow]

Just a piece?

Then I wonder how the final versio is going to be ;) keep up the good work, it soudns intresting

TomConfidential responds:

Like most of the songs i have it's definately a work in progress. thank you for the kind review! I'm planning on replacing the synth guitar with a real guitar recording. keep in touch, definately more to come

[Halo - Escape from Halo]

My advice

Just keep on play the game OR make music and go on until its sharable before uploading... I mean... come on, is this serious?

F-778 responds:

yes

[FF11~On Slaught [orch]Fantasy.]

Sounds good to me

Good start, better build up, makes me wanna play an rpg ;)

[Pen Pen]

Good start

seems like a good start for a track, altrough its far from finished. Like the play that you have done with the drum, but it could get more adventurous, for sure one to work out if you ask me ;)

[Civilized Society (EQ)]

somebody got my attension

a song with a deeper tought, like that fact!
The track itself sounds finished. Sure it will do a good job on the floor ;).
Its devided altrough the leadline is coming back maybe a bit to often. Still high points for the intension of bringing real facts up front by making music, I like that!

Equation responds:

Thanks, I spent alot of time EQ'ing the track so it it didn't sound distorted, I'm bored of this song myself probably because I heard it over and over whilst making it... It does start to annoy you when repeating over and over and over and............

[[L3] Paradise]

nah...

I am so sorry for saying this, cause the song itself is just proper, but its just way to.... been here done that....
still, keep up the good work, cause how you have arragned the track its just properly. but nothing special to me...

LiquidEvolution responds:

I understand where you are coming from. This sub-genre of trance is around everywhere. Probably enough to annoy anyone who listens to trance. Though, I would've really liked some creative critisism.

[Energy - [viz]]

Good work

Its nothing really special but what I can appriciate is that its comletely worked out and masterd, its a typical song that you could hear on a fairground while riding one of the rides. the vocals are done very proffesional. You maybe not a proffie yet but you have proved that you can handle the software ;)

DJ-VIZ responds:

Thanks for the rev, yeah I can definitly handle the software :P