Carf's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[But Who Will Save The City]

The name caught my attension ;)

Promising start of the track. Got my intrest already. Altrough I am not the biggest D&B fan, its quiet catchy, would fit well in a MegaMan game or anything like that.
Keep up the good work.

SymbolCymbal responds:

HAHA thanks i think thats one of the reasons the track gets so much attention.
thanks for the review

[Control (dub)]

Art :)

And I like people who try to do things different.
It would have fitted a 100% in Portals.
Cool atmosphere, and I like your lil statement in the comment to.
Keep up the good work.

Sythec responds:

Thanks.
Check out 'Black Angels"

[Waterlight]

Then FINISH IT!

Cause it already sounds more then promising!

Nice flow, and good story telling, it kept my intrest for 3 minuts and its not even ment to be a loop ;).

Keep up the creativity.

S3C responds:

Thanks Carf! I just dont know where to take it :'(

[Yanathrea]

something is missing...

What is it...? Reading your own comment I assume that you are not really proud of it yourself... *finished it early*? Well... my advice would be... work things out before you upload... it gives me the feeling that you rather upload something cause its *cool to have something on your list* then rather work it out before you *really got something that is worthy to upload*. Its... just not finished... its missing creative love...

DJBulwark responds:

I keep getting that I'm missing something, hell even I know something's missing and I have a hard time figuring it out... Kind of discouraging but I figure I should probably work a little more until I find my niche.

Thanks for the review nonetheless though!

[Desert Flare]

a 5

for the amazingly cool drum.
For the rest... it did not really kept my intrest...

S3C responds:

well atleast you liked the drums :P

Thanks for the review!

[Short Funkicity Loop]

practice creates art..

Good that you make an attemp to make music but a few guidelines would help you forward I think...
Its a loop, and a loop (even if its 6 seconds) should kept the intrest of the listener for more then a minute (keep in mind that it could be used in a game) the overall idea of the Audio Portal(AP) on Newgrounds(NG) is that other creative people who create flash movies, can use royalty free music. To be honoust, I am afraid that this is not going to be used in any movie... Keep on trying, practice and learn how to use the tools, but for your own sake... do not upload this kinda stuff before admins will ban your account for uploading spam... Please do not feel offended, I just give you some nifty advice.

Jaye19 responds:

Hey man it aint spam I am just trying to do my best even though ir really sucks and thx for tha review

[Here Comes The PAIN!]

nice... tech demo...

I could not find a song... its more like a demo for a new tool... where is the beat? Its completely snowed under by the guitar riffs. The sound of the guitar is cool, that is for sure... but still... I cannot find the song wihtin the track.

oogock responds:

what do u mean? the whole thing is a song it has a intro chorus verse solo the works all its missing is the vocals

[Midnight Darkness]

would fit perfectly in an action game

Nice mix, good use of of sounds, kept my intrest long enough to give a clear judgement ;). Keep up the creativity.

TimmyDope responds:

Thanks for the positive feedback. IF you liked this one make sure you check out my other tunes too.

[[Speed Rap]- Cynical Pinnacle]

Point taken.

Some things just belong to Newgrounds ;)
Love the try to do something diffrent, lets hope
a crazy animator fix something around it.
Keep up the crazy good work.

JonH2O responds:

Hah that would be an interesting music video. Particularly if the imagery related wholly to what was being said.

[Foxtacy - Pulsar]

Good intension

Its a nice attemp altrough (dont get me wrong) it sounds like you are working with music software for not that long. It misses a lot of things to give it a real vibe. Altrough the basic is already there, it could use some pieces here and there to make the track stand on its own legs. Keep up the good work, you know what you are doing.

Foxtacy responds:

Hey there Carf! thanks about the review

"It misses a lot of things to give it a real vibe"

well, if you check my previous works (if i got it right) almost all of them, got "something more" than this. My intention with this song, was to make a background music, for game developers arround newgrounds. They have that "shape" (by that, i mean that, this kind of music does not have a "main melody" for example).

but thanks anyways for the SINCERE review.

if you have tips about the mixer on fl studio (about what to use on each channel and each track) please let me know.